Good job on being clear! Your beginning hooked me, and you read with expression! You should make sure your proof fit to your little paragraph, but most of the time, you did!
That was a perfect example of a literary essay! You didn't goof of but still was entertaining, you had great reasons and evidence, you had a great claim and mentioned it often, and finally you wrapped it all together with a great conclusion!!! Really good!
Great job Alino! I really liked your literary essay, and your hook in the beggining of the lead. I liked how you gave lots of example, and when you transitiones smoothly on each chapter! Once again great job!
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Great job! I like how you explained the character's feelings very well.
ReplyDeleteGood job on being clear! Your beginning hooked me, and you read with expression! You should make sure your proof fit to your little paragraph, but most of the time, you did!
ReplyDeleteI did a really god job I like your intro and I also like how your voice is very clear
ReplyDeleteI love how you used quotes and you stated your claim was clear in your text. Great Job😘!
ReplyDeleteThat was a perfect example of a literary essay! You didn't goof of but still was entertaining, you had great reasons and evidence, you had a great claim and mentioned it often, and finally you wrapped it all together with a great conclusion!!!
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loved your work and loved how you show why and when and show evedince from the storuy😜
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ReplyDeleteGreat job Alino! I really liked your literary essay, and your hook in the beggining of the lead. I liked how you gave lots of example, and when you transitiones smoothly on each chapter! Once again great job!
ReplyDeletei liked how you made your message universal
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